Dark Eyed Pixie

that's so sweet. I think you captured the emotions of going on a first date with someone you like really well. Great job, well done!

this is so lovely. I can't find anything wrong with it so I'm just going to tell you how much I loved it. it's so sweet and it's written in ...

I like this, I think you should definatly write more.... and then PM me when you do :) I really like the way you wrote this, good work xxxx

I loved it. Write more!!!!!! Please? Pretty please? Let me know if you do:) xxxx

I really liked this, it made me laugh in all the right places, and I love Snape in this. Let me know if your going to post more, I'd love ...

I love this so much! You've described the relationship between Carter and Lana really well, it's cute. The mini suspense is really bugging me, I wanna know why she has ...

wow, that was really fantastic. I honestly can't find any problems with it. it's really fantastic I can't think of any other way to say it! x

I really like this! I think it's cute Nick took her out for ice-cream, was it to take her mind of things? I little thing, why would bonnie tell someone ...

Thank you all so much for reviewing! I know some of the details are a little sketchy, but hopefully it'll all be explained as the story progresses. Think you can ...

I love these. My friend bought the first one for my birthday, and i've read them all. it's a really good series!

This is really good, I didn't find any mistakes! I like Elaine, she seems really sweet, is she going to be included in it more? PM me when you have ...

this is good, i think you should stick with it. Your english is very good considering it's not your first language. I'd love to read more of it,, Pm me ...

I really hope you continue this! this is really good, PM me when you have the next bit posted! xxxx

I really like this. You give such detailed description, but let the reader imagiine somethings for themselves. I cant wait to see where you go with this. PM me when ...

Wow Ian is a dope. I had a feeling something would happen between Ian and Brianne though. Anywho, great work PM me when you have the next bit posted xxxx